望湘人·记归程过半
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记归程过半，家住天南，吴烟越岫飘渺，转眼秋冬，几回新月，偏向离人燎皎。急管宵残，疏钟梦断，客衣寒悄。忆临岐，泪染湘罗，怕助风霜易老。
是尔翠黛慵描，正恹恹憔悴，向予低道：念此去谁怜，冷暖关山路杳？才携手教、款语丁宁，眼底征云缭绕。悔不剪、春雨蘼芜，牵惹愁怀多少！
望湘人·记归程过半译文及注释
译文
归期已经过半，但举目遥望南天，吴山越水，云遮雾障，虚幻缥缈，前路仍望不见头。离家几月转眼已是严冬，缺月的清辉洒满大地让离家的游子心生愁绪。夜深了，附近不知何人歌筵上的急管繁弦已经消散，报时的钟声稀稀疏疏，惊醒梦魂。回想当日分别时刻，簌簌珠泪，沾湿了她的罗衣。这般愁绪让人更添风霜啊。
你匆匆描过眉，深色凄迷憔悴的向我低诉：你这一去，山高水远，没有奴在身边，谁来疼你，对你嘘寒问暖呢？刚刚拉住伊人的手，让她亲切的叮咛嘱咐，眼前便见那飘飘浮云塞满了去路。我们恨透了离别，它给我们带来了多少的愁苦啊！
注释
新月：缺月，农历每月初出的弯形的月亮。
燎皎：形容明亮。
翠黛：眉的别称。古代女子用螺黛(一种青黑色矿物颜料)画眉，故名。
恹恹：精神不好，困倦的样子。
杳：远得看不见踪影。
蘼芜：一种香草，别名江蓠。“江蓠”谐音“将离”。
参考资料：
1、喜马拉雅. 望湘人·记归程过半
望湘人·记归程过半鉴赏
客中思家，早自《诗·魏风·陟岵》始，千百年来，一直就是诗歌中的传统题材。此类作品大都写于游子离家途中或在他乡住定之后，也就是说，写在游子与家人之间的空间距离正在不断拉长或已经拉长到了一定限度的时候。而本篇的作者却别出心裁，他选择了归程业已过半、与家人之间的空间距离正在不断缩短之中、羁旅生活行将告一段落这样一个时间点，来抒发自己的思家怀人之情。这种构思十分高明，其一，它不落前人窠臼，以生化熟，推陈出新，容易攫住读者；其二，当此渐行渐近之际，离愁别恨尚且浓重如许，那他更行更远、所行既远之前日、昨日的客中相思之苦极、痛极，岂不都在言外了吗？
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以上三句，一笔绾住今昔，泛说较长一个时间段内的离愁。下文则留墨特定当下客馆中的孤苦况味：“急管宵残，疏钟梦断，客衣寒悄。”夜深了，附近不知何人歌筵上的急管繁弦已经消散，报时的钟声虽然稀疏，但在静夜中却显得特别警动，以致惊醒了词人的梦魂。当此万籁俱寂之际，他格外地感到了寒冷和孤独。于是，词人想念起他的妻子来：“忆临岐，泪染湘罗，怕助风霜易老。”他所最最不能忘怀的一幕，是当日分襟（“临岐”，到了岔路口。诗词中往往只作临别义用，不必呆看）的那一刻，簌簌珠泪，沾湿了她的罗衣。（由自己之“客衣”，引出伊人之“湘罗”，文心甚细，针脚遂密）。此情此景，一想一断肠呵。旅途风霜，本就使人憔悴，再加上相思之痛的折磨，恐怕人更老得快了。“助”字下得妙，读者试闭目冥搜，看能找出第二个字替去它否？“风霜”侵蚀人的肉体，“相思”啮咬人的精神，一自外攻，一从内“助”，不“老”何待！此一韵，上七字宕一笔忆“人”，下六字拖转来叙“我”，一推一挽，又是一度宛转。至此，上片四韵已有三番一韵之中前后排奡了，文情云谲波诡，不受控捉。
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犀角透鱼龙，石肌蕴星斗。亦有无情花，枝头鱼贯柳。
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清都观答幼遐
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唐代：
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韦应物
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逍遥仙家子，日夕朝玉皇。兴高清露没，渴饮琼华浆。
解组一来款，披衣拂天香。粲然顾我笑，绿简发新章。
泠泠如玉音，馥馥若兰芳。浩意坐盈此，月华殊未央。
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黎城遇雨
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明代：
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申佳允
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策蹇聊为汗漫游，流光倏忽又惊秋。萧萧黄叶濛濛雨，惹起离人一段愁。